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Had an idea for the "New" New Warriors

Series Pitch (Condensed)

A genius teen (“Screen Time”) can pull instant knowledge from the web straight into long-term memory and interface with connected tech via brain-to-Wi-Fi. People dismiss him as “a walking search bar,” but his power—when fully exploited—makes him terrifyingly capable for medicine, security, engineering, and, if misused, crime.

Core Tone:

Near-future techno-thriller with superhero flavor: inventive, ethical, and occasionally dark.

Power System: Screen Time (reimagined)

  • Acquisition: As a child (autistic, highly imaginative), he’s using his ability, he researched and found out about a non-surgical neuro-interface (helmet/electrodes → later refined nano-link). It amplifies neuronal signals and allows bidirectional networking without implants through precise EM coupling. He is still exposed to the experimental gas, but it has nanobots that can implant microchips in his brain and work with his neurons to connect to the net and use the web as if his brain were his hands on a computer and much more. He realysed that he didn't need a helmet to do what that guy in this video did. he could just use his brain.

  • What he can do:

    • Cognitive download: Research anything; the data “sticks” (near-eidetic retention).

    • Live device control: Hijack or pilot IoT, EVs, robots (e.g., Teslabots), cameras, smart locksanything online.

    • Remote senses: View through networked lenses/cams; drive a car or bot like it’s a limb.

  • Limits & costs:

    • Bandwidth & focus: Multitasking strains him; complex code manipulation induces migraines.

    • Ethical firewalls: Turning devices into weapons = moral line; cutting Wi-Fi stops him unless he planted contingency code.

    • Safety: Overclocking the interface risks syncope or worse—he’s learned restraint.

  • Applications:

    • Heroic: live triage via journals, hospital assistance, forensic recon, non-lethal disarms.

    • Creative: draws and codes by mind-controlling software (slow, taxing, but precise).

    • Villain potential (explored but rejected): bomb design, malware, mass havoc.

Team Reworks (keeping your upgrades)

Snowflake (power boost)

  • Upgrade: Not just “ice shuriken.” To form ice on demand, they need hydration control + heat exchange + airflow shaping—a Katara-style hydrokinesis with thermokinesis and subtle aerokinesis.

  • Uses: Flash-freeze, mist shields, ice grapples, atmospheric cooling, precision ice constructs.

Safe Space (rules lawyer)

  • Canonical quirk: Shields others, not himself within a bubblle sheild. He can't inhabit them,

  • Exploits I proposed (kept):

    • Walling the threat: Shield the gun or the bullet’s path, not his body—still “protecting others.”

    • Paneling: Hex-grid around him (front/left/right/top/bottom) to ""indirectly" defend himself. He just makes sure the edges of the walls do not touch.

    • Form variation: sharpen edges into sharp blades. prybars for utility.

    • Assist tether: Wrap teammates so he can project from their positions.

  • Mechanical fix: Screen Time designs a powered suit with a mechanical shield or hard-light emitters so he isn’t personally “inside” the field—preserves the rule while letting him operate solo in a pinch.

Trailblazer (divine backpack)

  • Backpack = pocket dimension with curated output.

  • Your twist: It’s a miraculous gateGod regulates the outputs (e.g., refuses a bomb to an evil requestor).

  • Tactics: Pulls materials/parts on demand so Screen Time can build safe gear; can also fetch fully formed tools (with moral gating).

  • Faith note: Native American & Catholic

  • Keep as is: Morbiius-linked transfusion; vampire skillset. but aging normally.

  • Team value: Recon at night, resilience, non-lethal crowd control (fear/stealth), moral foil to tech overreach.

Signature Combos

  • Sightline Shielding (ST + SS): Screen Time streams his POV to Safe Space’s HUD; Safe Space panels threats the moment they appear—zero lag cover.

  • Cryo-Catch (Snowflake + SS): Snowflake forms an snow cushion under a falling target; Safe Space buffers heat/impact with a bubble shield around them or a flat cradle shield below them to catch them while Snowflake softens their blow.

  • Rapid Fab (ST + Trailblazer): Trailblazer pulls components; Screen Time assembles a suit add-on (e.g., non-lethal taser-net drones) in hours—not weeks.

Villains & Family Drama (key arcs)

  • Uncle Jimmy (tech antagonist): Sees the power’s potential and weaponizes it—facility overrides, drone assaults, network blackmail. He advises Screen Time to hide the true capability so enemies underestimate him. He is Screentime/Nooshere's uncle.

  • Uncle Thomas (criminal subplot): Grooming scandal discovered via Discord DMs. Screen Time collects evidence, involves police/FBI, and wrestles with betrayal. Confession ends the ambiguity; ST keeps boundaries, no vigilante “justice.” He is Screentime/Nooshere's uncle.

  • CIA thread: The prototype originated from a government-adjacent research request; later they try pairing ST with Trailblazer (materials on demand) for sanctioned ops—raising questions about state power vs. ethics. Screentime's grandpa built the gas for the CIA and used it on himself to advance his medical career.

Ethics, Boundaries, and Growth

  • Rules Screen Time adopts:

    1. No lethal blueprints transferred from mind to action.

    2. Medical first: use knowledge to heal before harm.

    3. Consent & warrants for deep device dives unless lives are at immediate risk.

    4. Throttle caps on dangerous prototypes (e.g., plasma devices limited to lab sims).

  • Neuro-health: He learns to pace downloads, sleep, and offload part of the work to teammates and edge devices, not just his cortex.

Identity & Representation (from notes)

  • Snowflake & Safe Space: twins; I'm treating them as Black in my version. Protestant Christian.

  • Trailblazer: Native American, Catholic.

  • Screen Time: He looks like he may have Indigenous heritage; he marries Trailblazer later; they have a daughter.

Scene Seeds (tight versions of moments)

  • Home Invasion Test: ST pilots two service robots over Wi-Fi to disarm an intruder while Safe Space shields by wrapping the assailant’s weapon, not himself.

  • EV Pursuit: ST takes over villains’ electric cars, views dash-cams as eyes, parks them safely while Snowflake ices the road to stop reinforcements.

  • Evidence Night: ST screenshares Discord logs to detectives, explaining how he accessed them without revealing classified tech; Trailblazer quietly keeps a hand in the backpack… and doesn’t draw the pistol.

Rename Ideas (if I want distance from Marvel IP)

  • Screen Time → Bandwidth / Overlink / Noosphere (I want Nooshere)

  • Snowflake → Cryos / Aqualux / Frostline

  • Safe Space → Bulwark / Aegis / Safeguard

  • Trailblazer → Wayfinder / Provision / Reliquary

  • B-Negative → Hemlock / Nighttype / Redline

Logline (one-liner)

A teenage technopath who can learn anything and touch every network must choose between saving lives with knowledge—or becoming the most dangerous weapon on Earth—while a faith-guided teammate, a rule-bending shieldbearer, a hydromancer, and a vampire try to keep him (and his family) on the right side of the line.


The noosphere is the "sphere of human thought" and the collective consciousness of humanity, seen as the third and final stage of Earth's development after the geosphere (inanimate matter) and biosphere (life). This concept was developed by scientists and philosophers like Vladimir Vernadsky and Pierre Teilhard de Chardin to describe how human intellect, culture, and technology are transforming the planet into a single, interconnected mental layer. Today, the internet is often cited as the most clear manifestation of the noosphere, connecting billions of people and their ideas globally.


A lot of people underestimated these characters and honestly I just thought of exploitations.

 
 
 

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